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Nov 12, 2014 at 2:02pm
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Edited: November 12, 2014 at 2:22pm
Re: Punctuation, Dialogue, and You
by Jimbo
Love love love Abercrombe. Sand dan Glokta is one of my all time favorite characters. *Smile*

My question is about thoughts. I see them done several ways.

"This guy is a moron," he thought to himself.
"This guy is a moron," he thought to himself.
This guy is a moron, he thought to himself.

Lately I have tended to the second one, but I would love your thoughts on it.


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Punctuation, Dialogue, and You · 11-02-14 5:18pm
by KMH
Re: Punctuation, Dialogue, and You · 11-11-14 2:27am
by L. Stephen O'Neill
Re: Re: Punctuation, Dialogue, and You · 11-11-14 8:15am
by KMH
Re: Re: Re: Punctuation, Dialogue, and You · 11-11-14 5:19pm
by L. Stephen O'Neill
*Star* Re: Punctuation, Dialogue, and You · 11-12-14 2:02pm
by Jimbo
Re: Re: Punctuation, Dialogue, and You · 11-12-14 2:49pm
by A E Willcox
Re: Re: Re: Punctuation, Dialogue, and You · 11-12-14 3:00pm
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Re: Re: Re: Re: Punctuation, Dialogue, and You · 11-12-14 3:47pm
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Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Punctuation, Dialogue, and You · 11-12-14 3:50pm
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Re: Re: Re: Punctuation, Dialogue, and You · 11-16-14 11:57am
by Joto-Kai
Re: Re: Re: Re: Punctuation, Dialogue, and You · 11-16-14 3:24pm
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Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Punctuation, Dialogue, and You · 11-16-14 6:39pm
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Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Punctuation, Dialogue, and You · 11-16-14 7:46pm
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Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Punctuation, Dialogue, and You · 11-18-14 6:21pm
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