Noticing Newbies

Thanks,
I read through some of your poems. I like the Music one. Having an architectonic form makes for good lyrics. Audiences need to hear something come back that they recognize. It also shows that you think music is the frist and most important thing by using the word or derivative over and over in the first position of each line. That got a bit much but it did make for the layout of the lines of the poem to be pleasing, almost a trumpet shape. Sorry if this not what people do here but hey, I'm new.

Jack