Noticing Newbies

oh wow, now that really isn't my type of music but I have to admit it's pretty cool. Kind of like an opera but without acting. I suppose you're right though, with any text working for a song. I just have this idea in my head of how songs are built up and it strayed from that. But I do think that if you just want to get a message across it's a little too vague, which works better for poems than songs. But maybe that's all about taste in the end, and if so, the only thing that matters is if you like it. It's not a bad piece after all. :)