Noticing Newbies

Hello all, I've posted a few items to this site, and have received a few reviews of them already. I would love to hear anybody's input into how I can make them better. I have a MA in English, and my undergrad is actually in Creative Writing. I used to teach Freshman English at Gannon University in Erie, PA, and I love reviewing others' writing to try to help them make it better. If anybody has any recommendation on how best to do this, please let me know, or if you would like a new set of eyes on your work, please feel free to let me k now how best to find it, and I would be happy to do my best to give some good feedback. I'm very excited to be here, and have the opportunity to share writing in a community of writers. It kind of reminds me of the salons they used to have in the 18th century. Thanks to all who took the time to read and comment on my work, and I look forward to, hopefully, becoming a valuable member. - Julie