Writing Critique Group #1

I probably should have done this first but I wanted to get us all thinking about how we wanted this forum to work right away.

I have been a member of WDC for almost two years. This might make me the baby of the group. During my first year I have participated and placed in both erotica and fantasy writing contests. My works typically contain some form of erotic scene. In the work I plan on submitting to this forum the erotic scenes occur in later chapters. The work is rated 18+. I am willing to review items rated as high as XGC. I am very open minded and will read something once before I decide whether or not it is my "cup of tea".

My novel is High Fantasy. It is the story of a Prince, a mage, and a Minotaur. The Prince and the Minotaur both love and desire the mage. She must choose which she will be with and risk losing the other. Meanwhile, the ruler of one of the four kingdoms that constitute their world is making plans to marry her daughter to the Prince. When she realizes this mage is an obstacle to her plan she goes to great lengths to prevent her plans from going a rye.

J. L. Henry