can you post a link? I'm a newbie as well, so might not be able to readily find it when I have a chance to review again.
What size story are you aiming for? short, novella, novel?
I've got a lot of dialog in my story I'm working on, and advice I'm getting is to cut down description and keep the dialog. Dialog is a form of motion, so if you had to wait 50 pages for dialog, what kind of motion is going on?
Guess I'll find out when I get a moment to read your story. :)
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