October Novel Prep Challenge

Hi,

For today's brain storming session I decided to tackle the religion one of my species worships, and I was hoping someone can take a peak at it and let me know what they think. Does it sound reasonable? Is there anything I can do to make it better? Also what other things do you think I should add for how they worship?

And don't mind the stuff after the **** that's just rambling when I ran out of ideas about the religion. Thank you for your thoughts!

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Thank you,

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