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Oct 27, 2016 at 3:35pm
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Re: Re: Day 27 rant
"I don't want to leave." Over and over like a mantra Adele Mitchell repeated the words. The hospital room had become her refuge, now it was time to leave.

This is my beginning line. the action is her having to leave and her reaction will show the evidence of PTSD.
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