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A place to request in-depth reviews of your novel's opening chapter ONLY. Any genre/rating
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Sep 11, 2018 at 6:01pm
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Hello,
I would love to have some feedback on whether I started my novel correctly or not. I have rewritten this chapter quite a few times now and I would like to know if it is any good.

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SUBMISSION · 09-11-18 6:01pm
by The Lost One
Re: SUBMISSION · 09-16-18 6:22pm
by Christopher Roy Denton
Re: Re: SUBMISSION · 09-17-18 12:46am
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Re: Re: Re: SUBMISSION · 09-17-18 1:59am
by Christopher Roy Denton

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