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Oct 10, 2018 at 4:22am
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Re: Should I complete this backstory short?
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I agree with Storm Machine Author Icon, it's helpful to you in the long run if you finish. My first question was 'how are Sebastian and Oscar similar in age if they're brothers? Do they have different mothers, or are they are a year or so apart and the other siblings further apart in age?' My second question was 'Why didn't Sebastian already know that Oscar doesn't like crowds? Is this their first big occasion?'

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Should I complete this backstory short? · 10-08-18 9:07am
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Re: Should I complete this backstory short? · 10-08-18 9:20am
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