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I don't have a lot of substance to say in reply. (There's not much substance to saying "I like this!" though I do.) I have only one real comment, and that's that there's two separate stories, one a sequel to the other, in this. The second story is the one you elaborate in the second paragraph, but the first story is in the first sentence to that paragraph: "Will and Stephanie would end up becoming an item." That's ... a big, long story in itself because it would be so hard to pull off.

But that's okay. That's what would make it a separate story. It's every romance story ever written: Boy wants girl and moves heaven and earth to get her.

Random thought: What could make it especially fun is if the very film-savvy AV guys (using dozens of masks and impersonations, serially and simultaneously) consciously employed romance-movie and romantic-comedy tropes to execute the maneuvers.