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I moved/deleted the two chapters that followed on "His Brother's KeeperOpen in new Window., then replaced the first of them with a near-duplicate of the original. That area, which has Patterson impersonating/controlling Frank and Joe Durras, is a tricky one, which is why I've never been back to it.

But I saw a chance to improve the end of that particular spot. Back when those chapters were posted, you could only give a chapter two choices, and so I wrote "The New Members" and "The New Seniors" very narrowly. "Senior SecretsOpen in new Window. still ends with only new choices, but the ending is designed to open out to allow a lot more choice. I might be back later today or tomorrow with some short chapters setting up possibilities.
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