30-Day Blogging Challenge ON HIATUS

Thank you. I commented on everyone's comments.

Thoughts:

1. Should you decide to do this in the future choose a writer who would be willing to comment on the comments. You got lucky this time!
2. I actually prefer comments to rate/review. This piece has 222 r/r so 'it is what it is'. R/R may be more useful on a new piece when an author is actively seeking feedback.
3. It didn't seem to evoke much personal experience other than Petra. Nature and its risks are remote to many these days.
4. It didn't seem to lead to much interaction. A more personal poem/story may do better.
5. Short is good. Flash fiction or shorter. No poem longer than a sestina (max 40 lines).

Responses were varied as it was approached in different ways. I enjoyed reading them.

I need to record this. It needs to be rewritten as if it were an operatic score. Its very oral and very musical. And some picked up on that.

Again, thank you to all.