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Oct 17, 2021 at 1:12pm
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Re: Contest Round Excitement
Good job, Rookie.*ThumbsUpL*

What's great about the story is that you don't feel that Guy's gonna be the antagonist. I just felt so sorry for the poor chap*Cry*: losing his parents, the unresolved father issue, his try to be true to their last wishes, him being slowly led astray... him being the shining knight for the girl. *StarStruck* (Yeah, I know I'm such a sappy romantic.*Vomit*

It would be a pity to see Anakin turn into Darth for sure.*Shock2*

If you're curious, here's mine:"Second Chance ("Antagonist" Background Story)

Can you find the antagonist?*Wink*
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Contest Round Excitement · 10-16-21 4:56pm
by Past Member 'stolenthrones'
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