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Oct 23, 2023 at 11:20am
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Re: Re: Day 30 – truly interesting
Thank you for your, as always, honest opinion, Ma'am.*Heart*

But this was just the synopsis, Ms. QueenNormaJean gettinPomsready , and I didn't want to give too much away, therefore the bare, ordinary facts.*Idea*

But believe me, it's gonna get special because they are they – and they react in a way that will make the difference.

Laura hiding the truth in the first place, is out of the ordinary already, I think. And believe me, I didn't see the one Vince will pull off at the end coming at all.*Shock2*

I wanted to end the story with them parting at the airport, and shooting each other longing glances across the terminal and them (and so the reader) not really knowing how it will continue... Will they, won't they?

But talk about revealing too much.*Wink*

Guess you'll have to wait until November*Smirk2* – I'm trying something new this year: airing the story on WDC while writing it. *BigSmile* Let's see how I do.
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Day 30 – truly interesting · 10-23-23 10:11am
by Olivia's on the road
Re: Day 30 – truly interesting · 10-23-23 11:05am
by QueenNormaJean gettinPomsready
*Star* Re: Re: Day 30 – truly interesting · 10-23-23 11:20am
by Olivia's on the road
Re: Re: Re: Day 30 – truly interesting · 10-23-23 11:27am
by QueenNormaJean gettinPomsready
Re: Re: Re: Re: Day 30 – truly interesting · 10-23-23 12:17pm
by Olivia's on the road

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