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Nov 9, 2023 at 7:50am
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Commentary: "The Road Back to Yourself"
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"The Road Back to YourselfOpen in new Window. --> "The Candidate PoolOpen in new Window.

I don't have a lot to say about this one. it was a runner-up in a poll we did a long time ago. The pairing (Will, as himself, with a replacement for Andrea Varnsworth) is one that's never been done before, but it left me feeling rather adrift. These are two characters who don't have a lot to say to each other, even when one of them is Will's RL girlfriend. So I played it the way I suspected most people wanted it played: in bed.

Otherwise, I used it to introduce and start to develop a new circle of personalities, those centered on Adam Dortch. That was a character who has been mentioned in a few other places but has never really said anything. He still hasn't said much, and his girlfriend has said nothing at all. But at least they are now firmly introduced and open to further investigation and development.
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Commentary: "The Road Back to Yourself" · 11-09-23 7:50am
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Re: Commentary: "The Road Back to Yourself" · 11-09-23 4:29pm
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