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Jul 16, 2024 at 3:51pm
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Can I please have feed back on this short story I wrote?
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Please, I need feedback and the people I sent points to review it haven't responded yet, I would greatly value what you liked and didn't like.

Sorry if this is against the rules, I'll never do it again
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Can I please have feed back on this short story I wrote? · 07-16-24 3:51pm
by Fake Nate
Re: Can I please have feed back on this short story I wrote? · 07-16-24 7:38pm
by tracker
Re: Re: Can I please have feed back on this short story I... · 07-16-24 7:43pm
by Fake Nate
Re: Re: Re: Can I please have feed back on this short sto... · 07-16-24 8:30pm
by tracker
Re: Can I please have feed back on this short story I wrote? · 07-17-24 2:13am
by Past Member 'ashok25'
Re: Can I please have feed back on this short story I wrote? · 07-18-24 5:55pm
by 🌞GeminiGem 🌻

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