Horror Writing Contest

I feel uncomfortable leaving you a review here. This is an interesting story, but it does lack some emotion; it is just a thing that happened. There was no sense of horror or terror. And you do need to ensure you use paragraphs to make it easier to read. Also, watch repeating words. The idea itself was fine, demon doppelgangers are always fun.

I should have come to you earlier to say this goes against the rules, so I will still count this.