It took longer than usual, but I finished todayās assignment. I came up with some good details I hadnāt considered yet. I also reworked something in my outline that I feel didnāt make sense. In the future time of my story, it wouldnāt make sense that they would still be mining the atmosphere of Jupiter and Saturn, so I instead have them siphoning hydrogen from the Sun. Iāll add that to my edited outline for Tuesdayās assignment.
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