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Jan 3, 2025 at 11:42am
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Re: Warehouse Warriors
by Nostrum Author IconMail Icon
It's alright. It's good to see you slowly getting back.

The branch itself seems to be rather unfocused, in that the wrestlers are obviously treating the masks as toys ("hey, we can turn into chicks! How about we fuck each other silly and then act girly?") It's alright to have Will explore a couple things, particularly as it involves having him (not under a disguise, not modified by Fairfax's group or Alex Day, but as himself) at the Warehouse, which is alien to him.

Have you considered doing a chapter for both options in "Wasteland Warriors"? See whether Will & Elsie or Will-as-Elsie feels like a better story? Might help you figure out what to do with this branch.
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