Noticing Newbies

Hello there, just a quick post to pop my head in the door so to say.

I'm a driver with lots of down time and have recently tried to write a few pieces, some poetry (not quite my thing but like to try anything once at least) and a novel.

Terry Pratchett, Game of thrones, Sci fi and the like is my bag.

I've put up for perusal a few chapters from the alleged novel and looking for any feedback good or bad, so if you have the time please go have a squizz and give me your thoughts. All appreciated.

Anyhow maybe this'll be the place for me?!

Thanks folks.