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Rated: 13+ · Message Forum · Entertainment · #213819

I've got the words, if you've got the time. Gimme your best Para/Poem.

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Apr 19, 2004 at 5:50pm
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Re: 4/5 Words - A Visit to the Mortuary
This is a cute poem! You and I both seemed to be thinking of the dead when we worked with today's words*Smile*

Here is one little technicality I noticed while reading your poem:

So she can comfortably waits for her wings

Keep right on writing!!

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