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I've got the words, if you've got the time. Gimme your best Para/Poem. |
First thank you all for reading my babble. ![]() Winds: The Uncompromising Tyrant- Wow Winds! What an insightful, inspiring piece! I think you’ve started a “Tame the Tyrant” movement, not to mix with tame the tiger slogan. ![]() Misawa: Step-and-a-Half- Wonderful narrative. My grandmother used to say, ”Before you misunderstand, understand!” This poem reminds me of that. ![]() Blue: reckon control-- outstanding four lines, Blue. Nice work. ![]() Pride Detained-- Hits the target! Thumbs up. “this emotion only makes my nose run” We must have the same allergies. ![]() Scarlett: If You Insist- So can I. Make it vanilla and coffee for me. I love anything that has to do with fooooood! Thanks Scarlett. I think I’ll go get a cone now. ![]() Marcie Thank You-- Brilliant, as always. I hope you have a good set of molars. ![]() Wordsy: One from the village idiot-- “It would seem I disturbed the slumber Of my long forgotten dreams” So poetic! I love the whole poem and the way you say it. A morning's word-- Poignant and insightful. “To face the truth of all I am And what I want to be” That is some tough job for anybody. ![]() In answer to your question about "There You Are," I wasn't thinking about my shadow, rather ![]() Candle Maker Aged Wisdom- ![]() ![]() ![]() *~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* "If Galileo had said in verse that the world moved, the inquisition might have let him alone." --Thomas Hardy-- |