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Nov 16, 2004 at 5:03pm
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Re: Re: Re: Taboo versus sacrelige
by A Non-Existent User
Not to disagree with tu amor, but I think the town in the story seems to come off as more of a "The Lottery" type town in which everyone is off-kilter than one in which religion causes normal people to do terrible things. In reading the story, I didn't find anything that I would consider to be sacrilegious at all. As far as the group vs individual evil goes, I think that one single religious nut in a story, with his motives and beliefs well-explained, can be much more offensive to sensitive religious people than a vaguely defined group.

Oh, by the way, not to nitpick, but the Ernie's hair- pumpkin guts simile later on in the story reads kind of clunky. Overall an OK story, though.
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Taboo versus sacrelige · 11-14-04 7:56pm
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Re: Taboo versus sacrelige · 11-15-04 4:20pm
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Re: Re: Taboo versus sacrelige · 11-16-04 11:52am
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Re: Re: Re: Re: Taboo versus sacrelige · 11-18-04 11:50pm
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