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Jon finishes highschool a star QB but he finds it is hard to stay in shape over summer
This choice: Jon becomes angry at the criticism  •  Go Back...
Chapter #5

The Girls Keep Laughing

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Jon began to become quite upset over the criticism.

"You really packed on the pounds Jon." Pam laughed.

"I can't believe you would let yourself go like this." Tracy went as far as to poke Jon in his bulging stomach.

Just then the most popular girl in school walks over to Jon. She goes by Alexandra. She's known for being a bitch and is constantly making fun of fat people. She's probably what inspired these other girls to be so catty. She walks up to Jon and the girls and....

You have the following choices:

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1. she really lets Jon have it.

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2. she's looking pretty chunky!

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