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What would you do if you had absolute and complete control over your best friend?

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Chapter #5

First Jared's pecs, then his lats, then his...

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Jared wandered around the food court of the large shopping mall. Not that he wanted to be there at all, but he was sent there by Drew, who had suddenly discovered that he now had the ability to teleport Jared anywhere he wanted. Drew just had to imagine a location he had visited himself once before, then he would silently issue a command for Jared to be there, and Jared would vanish from his current location and magically pop up at the location where Drew wanted him to be at. Drew was completely in control of where Jared would end up at, and how long he would stay at any place.

Jared wandered around the mall, wearing a tank top, shorts and tennis shoes. He would have preferred to wear a long sleeve shirt and jeans, but this was how Drew had sent him to the mall. He was a little annoyed that he had no say in the way he got teleported and what he had to wear, with his legs and arms exposed. Lastly, he had no idea how long Drew was going to make him stay there. He hated going to the mall, and the only places he really liked visiting were the video arcade and the sports store.

“Oh, man. What am I doing here? I wanna go home!” Jared grumbled as he wandered around the food court.

Meanwhile, back at his house, Drew lay on his bed.

“Let’s see… if I make him hungry enough, he’ll buy some food at the food court. Then, he won’t suspect it that I’m the only one causing his muscles to grow! Haha!” Drew thought to himself.

Then, moments later, it so happened that Jared heard a loud rumbling sound come from his stomach as he was walking around the busy food court at the mall. He suddenly became very hungry! He hadn’t eaten all day! Since he was already in the food court, he may as well buy himself some lunch, right?

Jared bought a burger and fries and he sat at a small table in the corner, where he ate all by himself. He finished all his food, and he gulped down his large soda, before he got up and wandered off.

Coincidence had it, that he came across a pair of students from his high school, who were also walking around the large, indoor mall. As Jared was walking around, suddenly he ran into Jason and Jessica, two students who shared his math class with him. They also knew Jared from soccer practice.

“Hey, Jared! What’s going on? We never see you here, at the mall!” Jason said to him.

“Hi, guy! What happened? You decided to come out of your mancave, huh?” Jessica laughed.

Both Jason and Jessica were eighteen and they were very athletic. They also knew Drew from school.

“I… Uhh… I decided to… Umm… Check out the mall. I mean… Uhh…” Jared just stammered shyly, not knowing what else to say.

“Jared! You’re such an introvert! We never see you outside of class! What have you been up to?” Jason asked him.

“Uhm… Nothing much. Studying and so on…” Jared sighed.

“Oh, you do other things!” Jessica laughed. “Come on! Don’t be shy! You also play soccer!”

“Uhh… Yeah… I’m not very good…” Jared mumbled, as he scratched the back of his head.

“You look like you’ve gained some muscle!” Jason remarked. “Are you going to the gym?”

“The gym? Me?” Jared grinned. “Oh, no, no, no… I mean… What makes you think that?”

Just at that very moment, as he was chatting with his two classmates, Jared was overcome by that weird, tingling sensation again! It couldn’t have come at a worse time, just as he was talking to people! Suddenly, without any warning at all, Jared’s pectorals grew by several inches, pushing outwards and sideways from his frame, and stretching out his tank top. His lats flared out as his shoulders grew wider by almost a foot, as Jason and Jessica looked on in amazement!

KKKKKKKKKRRRRRRRRRRRRR!!!!

Not only that, but rows and columns of well-defined, six-pack abdominal muscles surfaced over Jared’s lower torso, becoming to defined, that they were clearly visible through the thin, cotton fabric of the tank top, which was doing a horrible job of covering Jared’s expanding muscles!

Within a matter of seconds, Jared’s pecs, his lats and his abs had grown noticeably bigger, while he was chatting with his classmates in the middle of the shopping mall!

“Oh my gosh! Look! Your muscles just grew!” Jessica pointed out.

“Whoa, dude! How did you do THAT?” Jason exclaimed.

“Uhh… I… I just ate a hamburger… It must be the food I ate… Or something!” Jared stuttered. “Look, I gotta go! Talk to you guys in class!”

Jared quickly turned around and walked off. His tank top was feeling very tight!

“Ohh no! What’s happening to me?” Jared groaned, as he walked away as quickly as possible…
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