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Rated: XGC · Interactive · Fantasy · #1174314
Your car breaks down in the middle of nowhere...,.
This choice: Stay and wait to be noticed.  •  Go Back...
Chapter #4

Under New Management

    by: Drez Author IconMail Icon


The bed you're on is so large to you it's like a landscape of soft ground. You look around at the three maids cleaning the room. The cat-maid has something around her neck...most likely, a necklace. The bunny-girl is wearing a necklace too...and it looks like the same necklace that the cat maid is wearing. You look at the naga maid. The naga is a very beautiful woman....you would call her a babe if not for that 100-foot long snake part of her! The Naga is wearing a loose-fitting shirt that covers her DD-Cup breasts. The naga also has long red hair and has a cute face. The naga isn't wearing a necklace. The necklaces that the bunny-girl and cat-girl are wearing is dark green and they seem to glow with an eriee light. You look closer at the bed and see that the bedsheet has some sort of design on it. As you're looking at the design on the bedsheets, you hear the naga hiss. You look up to see the naga looking at you while the two other maids are still cleaning the room.
"Good, you're awake" said the naga.
"Where am I?" you ask.
"You shouldn't have walked down that path" said the naga. "you would've been safer then"
"Where am I?" you ask again.
"You're in the mansion of Lady Carmen, ruler of Upper Hell"
"Upper Hell?" you ask. "So....this is hell?"
"Yep" said the naga. "There's Upper Hell and Lower Hell. Upper Hell has all the important people in it: Hitler, those idiots at FoxKids that edited Escaflowne, Saddam Hussein, and so on. Lady Carmen is the ruler of Upper Hell"
"I thought that Lucifer was the ruler of hell" you say.
"Not anymore" said the naga. "the Lady Carmen took care of Lucifer and his supporters"
Someone even badder than Lucifer is running hell?! You're royally screwed now.
"And who are you and these two?" you ask.
"I'm Cessa" said the naga. "these two are Janney and Torum, maids to the Lady Carmen"
"And what am I doing here?" you ask, fearing the answer.
"You get to be Lady Carmen's plaything" said Cessa, clearly enjoying the look of utter horror on your face.
"Plaything?" you say with a squeak.
"It's either that or suffer for eternity" said Cessa.
"Umm......some choice" you mutter.
"Lady Carmen is rather...playful" said Cessa with just a hint of distain in her voice.
"How do I get out of here?" you ask.
"Either pray for God to save you, or (and if) you meet the Grim Reaper" said Cessa.
"There's really a..." you start to ask.
"You talk too much" said Cessa. "Well...I was told when you were awake I should bring you too Lady Carmen" Cessa picks you up from the bed and exits the room. Cessa slithers her way down a very long hallway that ends in huge double doors. The doors are immense to you and Cessa, as it towers over the both of you. Cessa opens a small door within the big door and enters the room.
You are now in what looks like a throne room. The ceiling of the room is so high you can't even see it. The room is filled with guards--more naga even bigger than Cessa is! The throne itself is pure gold and sitting on it is the LARGEST naga of them all. The throne itself is large, but the naga sitting on it is truly immense. Lady Carmen is easily a 1000 feet tall and 2000 feet long. You stare in awe at Lady Carmen and she smiles down at you.
"Welcome to my domain" said Lady Carmen.

You have the following choices:

1. You plea in front of Lady Carmen to send you back to Earth

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2. something else happens

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