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Your girlfriend always disgusted you, but when you break up, it gets a lot worse.
This choice: eats you, but you survive  •  Go Back...
Chapter #4

Near the Belly of the Beast

    by: Coram Author IconMail Icon
         As you're moved into Jade's behemoth of a mother's mouth, the stench of her breath becomes more pungent. Her tongue the size of a whale to your minuscule size cups part of the pizza, and behind you her teeth push down on the pizza. No way of getting out on this slice anymore.

         Her mouth began maneuvering the pizza towards her teeth along with you on it. Moving as fast as you can you position yourself off the teeth, and barely just escaped a painful death. Her teeth just missing you grabbed the cheese that was stuck you. Lifting you with the cheese you find yourself nauseated and thrown about. Wishing you were tossed into her gums, but beggars can't be choosers. Her teeth finally separate you from the cheese you were stuck to, and fall onto her tongue.

         As you look around you, all of that bite is looking like an amalgam of mush. The tongue is slowly gathering it all up in its center. That only meant one thing, Jade's mother was getting ready to swallow. And within a second you too were on the palate of the tongue. A piece of what seemed to be burnt crust was stuck on part of the tongue and you quickly grab onto it. The enormity of the tongue shifted, and took you onto a roller coaster, and thanks to your strength you hold onto the burnt crust that had saved you from falling into that putrid abyss.

         The tongue shifted again and you feel a rumbling from the back of the mouth. As the mouth shifts her tongue raises, she can tell of your presence, and feels the need to ensure her food gets to its destination. As gobs of saliva hits you, your strength is slowly fading. But can you hold onto this burnt crust for just a moment more, or will your strength fail and submit you to your fate as a crumb of food?

You have the following choices:

1. Your strength prevails!

2. You lose your grip and fall!

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