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Rated: E · Interactive · Action/Adventure · #1363002
Your a reporter investigating South Barkalow, a town with a 98% obesity rate.
This choice: Weve got these things in our neck see....  •  Go Back...
Chapter #5

Big brother is fattening you

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With one hand still on the wheel he pulled down his collar and moved his head away from the drivers seat to give you a clear look at the back of his neck.

Your eyes widened in horror when you saw a small grey lump in the back of his neck, a thin scar crossing over it a sign that it was not natural.

"They put this thing in your body. Nowadays they do it ta all newborns. Me, I had it done when I went in ta get my appendix out last year. I got something out and something in whether I wanted it or not"

"Last year!" No way. Their is no way this man put on so many hundreds of pounds in such a short time.

"I know what your thinking, and yes I can. You see this thing actually calculates how much we eat a day, what it is we eat and how much we move. If we eat to little, too healthily or excercise to much in a 3 a span of three hours we get an enormously painful electric shock. Like a taser in the brain."

"And this is legal?!"

He snorted. "Course not, but no one can do nothing about it. The police are all chipped, so is the media and anyone else who could help, ya can't get them out or the police take ya ta prison since it's also like one of those chips ya put in dogs. And if you try ta leave it goes off automatically. Th only one who aint chipped is that fat loving butterball of a mayor who had the whole thing started by givin a truckload a cash ta the wrong people."

"Wait....if it's like that then why are you telling me all this? I'm not going to get chipped.....am I?"

You have the following choices:

*Noteb*
1. Course not. Not unless you do something that the mayor thinks you shouldnt.

2. something else

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