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Chapter #6

Paying the price...

    by: revan Author IconMail Icon
Your blood runs cold for a few seconds. there must have been a little flaw that he used to tell them apart. You look up at him with a grim exression. The otter on the other hand is beaning. He points to his eyes and says.

"These babies have to see in deep water." He then sits down on the dirt He lifts a paw towards her face.

"But these babies dont like being on land for too long!" He wiggles his webbed toes.

"Come on, I won fair an' square." He looks at your doomed expression and dones a look of guilt.

"Oh where are my manners? I haven't even introduced myself. The name's Janus! What's your's lass?" he askes.

"Moira." You say. He gives a nod.

"Well now that we know eachother, licking my feet wont feel as weird!"

"Thanks..." You say sarcasticly. He moves his foot closer to your face and you sigh and take it in your hands. You can smell them form here and you wrinke your nose.

"heh-heh sorry. Put off taking a sponge bath for a couple of days cause I knew I was coming here." You glare at him but he merely shrugs. You look down at his sole. It is a bit large but only because otter paws are large by nature. You slowly bring it to your face and run your tongue along his foot's surface. You wretch but it only amuses him.

"Yeah, that does seem pretty gross. But whatever floats your boat." He says while admiring his nails. You try licking gently but your actions get you no where fast. Finally you give deep heavy slurps. against his sole. You see inprovements and realize that all of that grim is in your belly now. He wont let you pause for long though and soon you are worshiping his webbed toes. You're not sure but you think that the webbing actually helps build up toe-jam.

You suck his big toe and give a few final licks to his sole before Janus presents his other sole. Given another nasty foot to lick you almost break down but you lick it and will yourself through. Even though the taste is starting to make you sick. After another helping of web toe jam. You again finish off his sole.

You get up, thouroughly disgusted with yourself. He grins and looks at his feet.

"Well how very kind of you. I suppose I could be nice enough to give you your peace now. By-by" he walks off leaving you to enjoy the lake alone.

You have the following choices:

*Noteb*
1. a group of vermin show up!

2. Janus returns with friends!

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