Chapter #4Evil Naruto by: Unknown "We all have evil in our hearts, Hinata," said Naruto. The Demon Kyubbi had possessed him once again, with an overflowing amount of Chakra surrounding the pair. His form had Hinata pinned against a tree with claws threatening towards her throat. "We all do. Sasuke does, Neji does, I do..." he paused and exhaled. The power was overwhelming Naruto, his livid expression made that apparent. Nonetheless, he leaned in closer to Hinata's ear.
"You have it too."
Hinata wriggled under Naruto's strong presence. "No, Naruto...!" Hinata gasped as Naruto squeezed her tighter. "It's alright N-Naruto! You don't have to do this!" She hesitated again under Naruto's mighty grasp, but still found strength within her to try to persuade him to rethink. "You're good Naruto! You don't have to be like this!"
"Save your breath." he growled, grasping her neck. "You'll need it."
Naruto nipped at Hinata's neck and played at the skin with his teeth.
"N-Naruto..." she murmured, and gasped as he sunk his teeth into the nape of her neck. He smiled as he watched the trickle of freshly-drawn blood slide down her neck.
"Don't forget all they've done to you!" Naruto barked at her, drawing back. "They ignored you, Hinata! They never saw your gifts! You were part of the main branch and they tossed you aside!"
"Naruto!" Hinata cried.
"You know I'm right Hinata! You worked so hard and strived for attention! What do you think now knowing it's all for naught?"
"I-I..." Hinata let out a quiet sob.
Naruto pounded his fist on the tree. "Don't let them get to you! You're just their toy! They don't care!"
Hinata glared through closed eyelids. "W-Why, Naruto. It's just not fair..."
Naruto smirked as he noticed her reaction at his words. "You know the truth in your heart." he growled in her ear. "Take what's yours."
"Naruto..." Hinata breathed, a sound of harshness rising through her voice.
"Good. Now you know what you need to become!" he howled. All the Chakra that Naruto had released began to swell. The darkness that was clear in his eyes grew stronger and wilder. As the two became almost covered in Chakra, Naruto leaned toward Hinata and said once more, "Take what's yours!"
He kissed Hinata, all the Chakra gathered combining into the two where they met. As their tongues collided, all the Chakra Naruto had poured into Hinata's throat. Hinata gasped and struggled as her chest became full of the evil presence within him. The two violently released as Hinata began to cough and choke.
"Naruto! What have you done to me?" she pleaded. Naruto collapsed in exhaustion as he could only murmur;
"I'm sorry..."
As Naruto fainted, he fell to the forest floor. Hinata cried out as she saw Naruto's stomach, bare as his coat had risen from the impact.
His tattoo was gone.
Hinata gagged again, "It can't be...!"
At that moment, the Chakra, swelling in her chest tightened sharply and constricted around her heart.
'Now Hinata,' a presence said, rising from inside of her, 'Who will be punished first?'
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