Chapter #5Checks later by: Unknown Adriana decides to leave her shoes on, knowing that even removing one shoe for even a quick second can be disasterous for those around her. Besides, she can always inspect her feet when she changes her shoes for her upcoming game after all. As she grabs her backpack, the bell rings, signaling the end of class. She sighs knowing that she has missed her oppurtunity to change her shoes in the locker room without anyone else around.
As Adriana is walking to the girls locker room, she notices that her shoes feel a bit snug on her feet. She pushes the distraction out of her mind as she approaches the locker room door. As she walks in, she she can see the rest of her teammates staring at her. Sure they all admired her as a player, since she is the best on their team. Its just that waiting for her to take off her shoes is like waiting a ticking time bomb to go off.
As Adriana pulls her gym bag out from her locker, she feels someone grab her from behind.
"Hi, Adriana," a familiar voice says.
"Hello Krystal," Adriana says as she closes her locker.
Krystal is Adriana's best friend and the only person she knows who can tolerate the smell of her feet. Standing at a height of six foot nine, she is the tallest girl in school. Her straight, black hair reaches her waist as it frames her round face.
As Adriana is changing, Krystal says, "So, are you ready for the game?"
"Yeah, Adriana replies as she starts to untie her shoes." Her nose curlong as she can smell her feet through the fabric. The moment she pops her left shoe off, shevturns her head off to the side as tge strong aroma hits hits her. It doesn't take long before she can hear the other girls leaving the locker room quickly as her foot odor starts to fill the entire room. Krystal is the only one who remains, smelling the air as she starts to enjoy tge strong aroma.
"You are just weird," Adriana says as she takes her slightly damp socks off. As soon as both of her feet are bare, she looks at her feet, trying to see why they are tingling. She wiggles her long, thick toes now that they are free from her cramped shoes. After inspecting her feet, she decides to not worry about it as she slides on a fresh pair of socks and starts to get changed.
As Adriana is getting dressed, Krystal asks, "Is something wrong with your feet?"
"No," Adriana says shaking her head as she slides her kleates on, "I'm fine." As she is tying her kleates, she notices that they feel even tighter than her shoes did. In fact, she has to curl her toes just so they fit properly.
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