As your father puts a plate of pancakes in front of your hungry 17 year old brother, he smothers it in syrup, trapping you to the fluffy prison. "AH man, I'm starving!" he says as he gladly chows down on some bacon.He finishes the bacon, and the eggs off in under 2 minuets! It becomes clear that a growing boy needs lots of food, as he looks straight down at you...only seeing a pile of pancakes.
He starts to dig in. Chewing fast and asking questions later. (du dum tssss :3) He dropped some of the pancake from in his mouth, back onto his plate simply by chewing so fast. You knew he was always a sloppy and fast eater...which made you question how much time you had left.
As if on Que, he lifted up the chunk of breakfast you were on, and with no second thoughts, licked his lips and ate it. Plunging you into the warm and dark mouth.
What hits you first is the smell. One of pork, eggs, and sweetness swifting through the air. Not to mention the foul odor of his teeth. They hadnt been brushed yet. He started chewing, and within seconds, swallowing the first load. You tried to run out the mouth, but got caught by his teeth and were almost snaped in two. His tounge now picked up your taste, and shoved you into the back of his mouth with the rest of Jack's Pancake. You scream "JAAAAAACK!" as you are plunged into his throat.
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Jack lets out a huge burp. Charlie starts to laugh.
"Hey son, you should save some for Mino, ya know?" asked his father.
"Nah, I'm sure there will be some left. Maybe Mino can have my leftovers!" jack laughs
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You get slowly pulled through Jack's esophagus. The smell is unbearable, and you can tell he's laughing when the throat moves. Eventually you make it to his stomach, landing in a mush of Bacon, Eggs, Orange Juice, and Pancakes. "Jack! Let me out!!!" you scream as you pound on the stomach walls. It's no good though. He is too busy stufing his face to notice a small bump in his muscular chest. You lay down in the loud, gassy stomach and realize that you're under Jack's six pack. You'll soon become part of his body, protean for this massive giant! You start to cry, when the stomach acids start to flow in dissolving the mountian of food under you. As you climb to the top, just hoping for a way out, the acids hit your leg, almost instantly dissolving it. You whatch as your body becomes nothing more then soup in your older brother. You then pass out.....and become nothing but fuel for Jack.
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Jack stands up.
"I gotta go to the bathroom. Somethin's not right in my gut." he leaves, and comes back a short time later, and finishes his meal. Completely unaware that he'd just digested his brother.
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