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Rated: 18+ · Interactive · Fantasy · #1555909
A young man ends up living in a giant house with 4 beautiful, magic wielding maids.
This choice: ...you all became giants so I could have a kissing contest?  •  Go Back...
Chapter #4

Don't mess with the maids

    by: J. M. Darkly Author IconMail Icon
"...you grow larger and have a kissing contest for my amusement." Robert smiled at his own joke.

The maids, however, were less than pleased. Michelle froze in place, and Erika blushed redder than Ellen's braids, about ready to faint. Ellen herself was smiling away; half-considering the activity, and the other half rather enjoying Robert's little joke. Ria on the other hand was clearly annoyed and as she walked up to Robert, he felt that maybe he'd gone too far and she was going to punch him. Oh, if only he was so lucky.

A wicked smile spread over Ria's face as she lifted her hand. "As you wish." She snapped her fingers as she said this.

A blinding light exploded in Robert's face and he was hit with a sudden feeling of vertigo that knocked him on his ass. As the light cleared and his head along with it, Robert looked up at Ria...and up and up, about 60 feet up into Ria's giant, devilish smiling face. He no longer doubted them having powers. Ria scooped Robert up in her hand and held him close to her face.

"So," she sounded like she was rather enjoying herself, "How is this?"

"Well, not quite what i had in mind," Robert was terrified of the now gigantic and clearly angry maid.

"Oh, that's too bad." She spoke with a mock disappointment that chilled Robert to the bone. "I hope you're still up for kissing. I just love leaving my lovers with 'love marks'."

To clarify her meaning, Ria snapped her teeth at Robert, earning a very loud yelp from the tiny man. Luckily, it was Michelle to the rescue.

"Ria!" Michelle cried with outrage. "Stop this now and fix him! This is no way to treat our new master!"

"Ok ok." Ria chuckled a little to herself. "I was just proving a point." And with that she snapped her fingers again.

Robert was again blinded by light. This time when he opened his eyes he was on the floor back to normal size. The only difference was a newfound fear of maids, giants, and teeth.

So, is this enough to scare Robert away forever?

You have the following choices:

1. Rob runs away screaming...

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2. He overcomes his fear and stays the night...

3. Robert stays, but fires Ria

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