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Rated: 18+ · Interactive · Action/Adventure · #1561472
Live out your life.....just really,really tiny.
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Chapter #5

Rachel

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Your PoV

"Mmm, they do look pretty good," Rachel's godlike voice boomed as you watched her reach down for a cookie.

"Rachel!" you yelled up at her as you saw her monolithic hand casted its shadow on the cookie you were on. "Rachel! I'm down here!!"

The sweet chocolate and pastry flavored ground you were on rumbled as Rachel's fingers made contact with the treat. As she lifted the treat into the air, the force of the acceleration caused you to tumble and fall into a crater of melted chocolate chip.

"Agh!" You tried to get out of messy melted chocolate, but you quickly found that it was like quicksand. The melted chocolate pulled you down to your waist as you tried desperately to get Rachel's attention.

"Rachel! Please look down!" you cried as you struggled to free yourself from the thick chocolate chip. "Rachel I-" your heart sank as you looked at your girlfriend's beautiful face. She licked her beautiful red lips and smiled anticipating the sweet, chocolate taste of a mother's classic treat and oblivious to her tiny boyfriend's predicament on the treat she held in her hand.

"Rachel..." you whisper. You couldn't see beyond her mouth and nose, which had on normal occasions filled your world with delight and love when she acknowledged you were there with her, but she would be your doom as if she couldn't hear your pleas for help.

"Rachel! It's me your boyfriend!" Please don't eat me!" you cried at the top of your lungs. Knowing your proximity to her ears, it was certain that she could hear you. Does she?


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