The nose draws up anything loose and with a yank you start flying towards it. Suddenly, with a PLOP you drop back into one of the still a bit melted chocolate chips. You struggle but this time you're stuck good, flat on your stomach as the chocolate chip slowly hardens around you. You can just barely manage to raise your head to look around, and you almost wish you couldn't see what was coming.
"RACHEL!!!" You scream as loud as you can but she still can't hear you. "MMM! MMM! MMM!!!" You hear the sound of your sweet girlfriend's voice pop your ears like an explosion at this distance. "THIS SMELLS SO GOOD MISS! THANK YOU!" Rachel's tongue rolls over her beautiful lips and you don't know what is worse, the sight or the sound. "RACHEL STOP!!!"
Your screams fall on deaf ears and Rachel's lips part as she opens her mouth. Hot breath pours over you for a tortuous moment before you and the cookie with it are pushed into her waiting maw. "DON'T EAT ME!!! NOOOOOOO!!!..." Your cries are pointless as Rachel closes her mouth.
CRUNCH!
Even Rachel couldn't each such a massive cookie in a single bite. She just barely misses you with her first bite. "Rachel..." You can barely even muster the will to speak anymore. Here you were, stuck hopelessly to a chocolate chip on a cookie, just watching as your girlfriend chews.
Crunch crunch crunch... "YOUR COOKIES ARE GREAT AS ALWAYS!" You would hear your mother's reply, but it's drowned out by the sound of Rachel swallowing. GULP! "I TRIED THE RECIPE YOU GAVE ME BUT IT" CRUNCH! "IT DIDN'T TURN OUT RIGHT." CRUNCH! You can't believe it, your girlfriend is having a casual conversation with your mother while gradually sending you to your doom.
Crunch crunch crunch crunch crunch... You can't hear your mother's replies over the sound of Rachel chewing. GULP! "MMMM... THANKS, I'LL TRY THAT NEXT TIME!" You watch Rachel's teeth clamp together once one on the other side of the cookie from you.
CRUNCH! It's not long now, another 2 or 3 bites and you'll be all that's left. "RACHEL PLEASE!" CRUNCH "PLEASE STOP! DON'T" Crunch crunch crunch... GULP!CRUNCH! You scream in terror as the last bit of cookie nearby you is bitten off. Crunch crunch crunch... Rachel licks her lips again, gathering up the crumbs and bits of chocolate around them. "YUM..." The last of Rachel you'll ever see is her grinning face, her gorgeous eyes looking down at the cookie and not seeing you, only eyeing a nice treat with desire. The last bit of cookie is small enough she can just pop it into her mouth, and you hopelessly scream as loud as you can for Rachel to not eat you, but her luscious lips part. Once again her hot breath washes over you, now smelling sweetly of chocolate chip cookie. "HELP ME!!!" Rachel tosses the last bit of cookie into her mouth, and the light disappears. You scream, you cry, but it's pointless, outside this deathtrap Rachel closes her eyes in bliss as the flavor comes over her. "MMMM..."
CRUNCH! Rachel began chewing. The chocolate chip you are stuck to breaks off and goes flying around her mouth CRUNCH... CRUNCH... CRUNCH... "RACHEL!!! Don't... don't eat me..." You manage to get out between sobs as any hope of surviving this leaves you. "Rachel I..." CRUNCH... CRUNCH... CRUNCH... Rachel's tongue flicks the chocolate chip onto her horrific molars. "I love you Rachel..." CRUNCH You manage to get out less than a second before the chocolate chip with you on it is crushed to pieces. GULP! Whatever is left of you makes it's way to Rachel's stomach.
Rachel rubbed her stomach contently. "Can I have some more?" Rachel asked. "Sure honey!" Karen replied. Rachel reached for another cookie.
Neither had any idea what had just happened, though they both began to suspect something of the sort as days went by, then weeks with you never found. All of you had known this could happen one day, but you always hoped...
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