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Neil has caught a very rare illness which is causing him to slowly shrink
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Chapter #5

They ran into Melanie

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With that the two of them carried on walking through the ward, as they were walking; they heard a woman's voice say, "What are you doing wondering around here?" Neil stopped walking and looked towards where the voice came from. He saw that it was Melanie with her arms crossed as she walked towards the two of them.

"Hi, I'm Scarlet" said Scarlet as she waved at Melanie. "Melanie, Neil's nurse" said Melanie as she smiled at her. "I was board, so I thought that I could go sight seeing this ward" answered Neil to her question before. "If you were board, then you should have called me" said Melanie. "Are you going to take me back to my room?" asked Neil.

"Only if you wish, you want to take a look around the ward, then allow me to give you the tour" answered Melanie as she walked next to him. With that Neil and Scarlet followed her. The three of them walked through the Ward which is on the third floor of the hospital. They looked out of the window doing the hallway and could see a green garden with a fountain along with people sitting on benches.

"Wow" said Scarlet as she pressed herself against the window. "Well, when Neil is allowed out, you two can go out in that garden one day" said Melanie as she rest her left hand onto Neil's left shoulder. Neil started to make a huge yawn. "Feeling tired? Best go to bed" said Scarlet as she looked at Neil.

With that, Melanie lead the way back to Neil's room.

As they got there, Neil went into his bed. He looked at the door and saw that Scarlet and Melanie was looking at him. "Well then, best give you your sleep" said Melanie as she left the room with Scarlet. "See you later" said Scarlet as she left with Melanie.

As Neil fell asleep, he slowly shrank down another inch.

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