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Marvel's first family of superheroes is about to become even larger, or at least heavier.
This choice: The changes commence and both women get extra powers because of it!  •  Go Back...
Chapter #6

The changes commence and both women get extra p...

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As Susan and Jennifer swallowed the pills both of them let out loud belches that echoed throughout the room.

Susan instantly dropped to her knees feeling as if she had just run a marathon or at least devoured her way through a twenty course meal. “Ughh... Jen maybe this wasn’t such a good idea...” The Invisible Woman moaned pathetically.

She Hulk was at least able to keep her feet, though her face seemed to be turning green, at least more green than her face normally was anyway. She opened up her mouth to say something to Susan, however all that came out was another loud belch.

In the process of giving that belch however Jennifer’s belly puffed up quite noticeably making her look as if she had just swallowed a beachball. Susan suddenly felt the own pressure in her stomach lighten slightly as she began to giggle at the annoyed look on She Hulk’s face before her pearls of laughter transformed themselves into an equally loud belch.

It ended with a rubbery “THWACK” as Susan’s growing belly slapped against the ground. “Oh my.” Sue muttered in shock unsure what to make of her new proportions.

Jen just smiled at her grandly let loose with another belch, this one seeming... more confident if such a thing was possible to be said of a belch. As she did so her arms and legs grew thicker. “Susy the stuff is kicking in, don’t fight it!” She Hulk proclaimed loudly before expelling more gas from her throat and puffing up even bigger.

Susan stopped trying to fight it and with each belch her body expanded noticeably though she didn’t feel much heavier, no matter how much bigger she got, as if her strength was growing perfectly in time with her newer heavier body.

Within five minuets the process was done. Jennifer now stood 15 feet tall and weighed a ton and a half, Susan was 12 feet tall and weighed a full ton, both women’s entire bodies puffed up in every conceivable way.

“Wow this is new..” Jennifer admitted as she awkwardly tried to walk around at her new size, getting a feel for her bloated belly. Susan followed suit however she wasn’t anywhere near as sued to being big as Jen was and ended up tripping.

She slammed against the ground with a rubbery “BOING” sound effect and bounced high in the air. As if just to prove it wasn’t a fluke when she came down there was another rubbery “BOING” and she was lifted right back up in the air. This process might have repeated itself over an over again if Jen hadn’t been there to catch Sue when she came down a third time.

“That’s new...” The Invisible Woman admitted for lack of anything more obvious to say. Jen nodded and deposited Susan back on her feet. “Yeah it looks as if you’ve got so much flab on you that you bounce like a shiny rubber ball...”

“Rubber?” Susan pondered the word for a few moments before coenntrating and to both of their amazement she was able to stretch her arm across the room touch the far wall nod then pull it back.

“Amazing I’ve become elastic just like my husband!”

Jen paused for a moment closed her eyes and concentrated and she suddenly seemed to fill up just a bit more of the room. “I could feel that Sue, the madder I get the fatter I get, I guess I really am She Bulk now... but that means, well Medusa and Crystal will never be able to challenge us, now that we’re like this, will they?”
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