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Rated: 18+ · Interactive · Horror/Scary · #1730248

As Halloween draws near, something evil lurks in a small Texas town...

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Chapter #5

other, you choose?

    by: Snoogins Author IconMail Icon
(Originally authored by Misterguy)

Unbeknownst to the girls, things far worse than monsters and mad scientists lurked within the castle, hungrily awaiting victims. The two most dangerous entities were ...

Hungry Lil, the ghost of a woman executed for eating hear daughters, and her neighbors' daughters, many, many years ago. Lil used this castle as a hiding spot while the angry mob searched for her, and still haunts it to this day. In life, she was a large woman, standing 6'8" tall and weighing over 400 pounds. As a ghost, she looks much as she did in life, although she obviously weighs nothing now. Despite being an incorporeal spirit, Lil is very much capable of eating any one of the young girls about to enter her domain, either by swallowing them up in her ghostly jaws and draining their life force or by luring them into her hidden pantry, where she has power enough to take physical form and cook them alive. Lil can only be defeated in two ways: either she has to absorb the life forces of two girls, thereby becoming solid enough to kill, or by attacking her in her pantry.

Jezebel, a powerful succubus summoned by an unwise would-be teenage warlock. After consuming the life-essence of her summoner, Jezebel rested in the castle until the girls' explorations roused her. The prospect of terrorizing, making love to, and then devouring four innocent girls is too great for Jezebel to resist. Standing fully 7 feet tall, Jezebel towers over the tallest of the girls, and sports breasts larger even than their heads. She also possesses small, curved horns on top of her head, and her feet end in cloven hooves. Jezebel's only weakness is love: in order for the girls to defeat her, they must either display true love for each other, or even for her.

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