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Rated: 18+ · Interactive · Action/Adventure · #1736910

The Interractive World of Max Von Crucial

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Chapter #5

The streets of Phoenix.

    by: pillas Author IconMail Icon
Max was giddy, all the chaos he could cause and mayhem just made him swill with excitement.

He was drunk off his own power like he usually was, and now he had a chance to recreate that exhilirating spark of causing havoc with an assistant in a place that was untainted by is wonderful gifts.

"Lets take a day off of order for today, and have fun what do you say?"

"I'm always ready for whatever you have in mind max"

"Oh really!?" He asked with a sinister gleam in his eyes

Anjeia looked startled, and scared at this.

"Oh relax darling, I woudlnt dare harm the only woman who share my enlightened view of the world!" laughing heartily.

Anjeia relaxed and gave him a playful tap on his back.

"Hmm, first we could do with some drinks"
he spotted a bar, more of a dive really, and pointing towards it with Anjeia wandered over.

It really was a dive, the place was clean but save from the cute twenty something bartender herself and the middle aged guy unsucsessfuly trying to chat her up it was empty. Max was dissapointed, he enjoyed an audience, the crowd and their reactions were like a drug to him.

'C'mon maureen!, just give me one chance! I swear I wont let you down again!"

"Fat chance jack, every time I agree to go out with you all you try and do is get into my pants, We never even got kissing before I had you pawing at me and groping me like a horny little kid"

"Im just lonely and I got needs, I dont really have alot of self control!, I promise I'll stop drinking"

"pfft you stop drinking and I lose my best customer, but maybe i'll consider it, theres more to this bar than booze"

"Aww mar, but your cooking is lousy!, why do you think we all get drunk when we come here"

"Your a real flatterer you know that jack, whatever ....OH! I'm so sorry I didnt see you two come in!, welcome to Maureens Watering Hole, I'm Maureen and I'll get you anything you need, ...dont mind jack, he's almost a fixture" she greeted Max and Anejeia.

"Someones gottta sit in this chair! might get loose or something" he mumbled to himself.

"Dont worry, Mind if we sit at the bar with you jack?" Anejeia asked

Jack studied this woman who came in with this older man, he was judging her, and liking what he saw, but he was wary as he saw maureen from the corner of his eye scorning him with her own eyes.

"Sure sure, Me and Maureen, we run this place make yourself at home!" he replied nervously, hoping he wouldnt ruin his chances with Maureen. She nodded approvingly and went to fetch some glasses, he sighed and wiped his brow.

Max studied the two and from their conversation with eachother already knew how he could help enlighten their lives! Well he couldn't wait to begin. So he didnt!

"So jack, I couldnt help but overhear, seems your having trouble trying to catch the sweet girl in the bar"

"yeah, well...We've always been good friends since she started college, and we had classes together. We both took english classes and I was always fascinated how she was a sci fi geek like me, we got along real well and went out a couple times"

"Buuut...." Anejeia interrupted.

"Sigh...I was always too eager, and she didnt want any of it, we had more dates but it ended the same...I would get nervous and try to...well you know" he gestured embarrasingly towards below the waist.

Max smiled.

"What if I could help you with your problem friend, you and her could be together and There would no problem for you to get into her pants any time you wanted?"

'id say your crazy, but at this point I'll give anything a shot" jack sighed in defeat, not taking what Max say seriously.

At that moment maureen returned from the back with freshly cleaned glasses.

Max gave jack a chesire grin and turned to maureen

"Alright fellas, whaddya like?' she asked cheerfully.

Max gave maureen a lecherous grin and maureen seemed to stiffen up, that jack didnt like at all one bit, but he let it go, Maureen wouldn't be caught dead flirting with a jerk like this.

"Well sweetie pie, I was hoping you would let my friend jack over there see what kind of panties you wear"

Jack spit out his beer and stared at the man, he couldnt believe how arrogant this fool was.

"Sure thing!" Maureen announced cheerfuly.

Jack just stared at her, thinking she was going to show this guy how she dealt with jerks like him, she kept a small revolver behind the bar, filled with blanks but it was enough to persuade the average druken joe to scram.

She reached down.

and pulled her blue jeans right off her legs, and kicked them off to side.

Jack stared dumbfounded, he was transfixed by the sight of a half naked maureen, the girl he yearned for and lusted after for quite some time, as she pulled off her pants and revealed to him, that she wasnt even wearing any panties, she went commando! his maureen never wore underwear to work!? his cheeks burned and more blood was pumping elsewhere rather than his brain.

"Ooh, naughty little girl you even shave too!" Max grinned.

It was true, she was shaved but the hair she did have was trimmed into a cute little pattern, the curly hairs forming a little arrow shaped goatee.

"Now jack, lets help you with your little problem"

"Whu" Jack tried to say as it felt as if he were being sucked into a whirlwind the world getting blurry and everything feeling cramped and mushy, almost if he was melting like hot wax.

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