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You wake up in the world of My Little Pony, but with very different ponies.
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Chapter #4

Concubine

    by: The Grand One Author IconMail Icon
Life was pretty good as a royal concubine. The food was good since good health was crucial to your job performance. The boss was absolutely amazing and always attended to your needs. The hours were a bit random since ‘the mood’ could strike Luna at any moment and you were expected to be on constant standby, but the pay wasn’t anything to scoff at either. The only thing you couldn’t really comment on were your coworkers, since you didn’t really have any.

It had only been a few months since Princess Luna had been freed from Nightmare Moon. In that time, Celestia had been working close with her sister to restore her house to proper order. The first matter of importance was Luna’s house guard, which filled out quite quickly thanks to a few brave volunteers. From there, various castle servants were reassigned to Luna’s wing of the castle as her personal staff. She had everything from maids, to private chefs, and even a cute unicorn mare for a secretary named Attentive Eye. Luna even got to pick out all their uniforms so everyone would be able to distinguish between them and Celestia’s staff.

But it wasn’t until you came along; neither sister realized that they had both overlooked one of the princess’ most important needs. It was a failure you were made most aware of every day as the princess used your body to quench a lust that hadn’t been properly sated in a thousand years, though thankfully she was beginning to slow down.

Regardless, you now held the honorable position of Senior Concubine in Princess Luna’s royal harem. Your uniform, which oddly you were required to wear at all hours except when actually working, was a cloth cod piece emblazoned with Luna’s cutie mark on the front. According to Sun Dancer, Celestia’s Senior Concubine, the uniform was meant to show the world that everything within it was the property of the princess.

As your peer, you often went to Sun Dancer for advice. An older Pegasus mare, she’d been in service to Princess Celestia for over fifty years, yet amazingly her body looked like it was just pushing thirty. Apparently life as a royal concubine had other benefits in the long term. You hadn't gotten to know the rest of Celestia's concubines, but they were still polite. There were eighteen mares, seven stallions, a male and female diamond dog, a male minotaur, a female gryphon, and a few more members you’d never actually seen but were assured existed.

But enough reminiscing. What does Luna want?

You have the following choices:

1. Luna's in the mood

*Noteb*
2. Luna wants you to follow her around

3. Luna says you have the day off

*Noteb* indicates the next chapter needs to be written.
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