This choice: Rachel comes home and Whitney is ready • Go Back...Chapter #5Rachel comes home and Whitney is ready by: mbarry   "Whitney, Eric, I'm home" Rachel stated. She walked in all done up with expensive clothes that Whitney would die for. Eric quickly ran down and gave her a hug.
"How long you going to be here?"
"Not long just picking up some clothes for going out on Friday night"
"really I thought you would spend Friday night in"
"Eric are you ok?"
"Yeah I don't know what I was thinking".
Whitney came down the stairs "Hey, can you come upstairs for a second".
"Ohh this is exciting I'll be right up".
Rachel followed Whitney into Whitney's room. Now or never Whitney.
"So is this information about a boy, need some fashion ti-" Rachel stopped speaking. She was now focused on the necklace which Whitney was holding.
"Ok Rachel, be honest, how do you think I dress, but how do you think you dress?"
"You dress like a nerd, if you dress well boys would ask you out more. I take great pride in the way I dress, trying to combine sexy, athletic, and professional". hmmmm Whitney thought.
"Actually, you dress like a nerd who goes unnoticed by boys. All the clothes that are in your dorm and in your room are mine and all the clothes in here are yours. The outfit you are wearing is mine, and the outfit I am wearing is yours. We decided to swap clothes last weekend. You are actually jealous of how I fill out your clothes and you feel like an imposter in mine".
Rachel nodded in agreement.
"Ok boys, are you interested in any at the moment, and if yes why."
"Yes a boy name Chase, he's a wide receiver on the football team, he's hot and nice".
"From now on you are only interested in cute boys who could be your husband. Also when it comes to boys it's tough for you because you get nervous talking to ones you like. Also you will forget about any time you had sex and you would need a serious relationship in order to give up your virginity, also sometimes you will be nervous when you bring boys around me, because you have a tough time seeing a boy picking you over me"
Rachel nodded again.
"Finally you will drop out of the clubs and cheerleading. You only did those things to appease our parents and try to impress them compared to me. Also are not a social butterfly anyone, you are a rather quite person who likes staying in weekends and doing nerdy things like reading comic books. In fact that pile of comics on my desk are now yours and you will never remember me being the one into comics. Only you".
"Lastly, you do not own a car, I own it and loan it out to you ask for it. You will now remember a childhood where i was cooler, hotter and sexier than you think about me as a 10 and you as a 6, and you feel as though you are in my shadow. Also since you love me like a sister you will come to me for advice and you will be honest with me about everything".
Finally Whitney put her necklace away.
"oh sorry, I must have zoned out there" Rachel replied. Whitney wondered how much the necklace worked.
"So Rachel you were telling me about a guy named Chase?" Whitney replied.
"Oh yeah, super hot, though I don't know I think he'd be more of a fit for you to be honest". Rachel looked around hesitantly. "Also can I have my clothes back, seeing you in them makes me feel weird."
Whitney smiled to herself. They quickly changed outfits. Whitney finally wore that expensive outfit and she looked great in it.Whereas Rachel looked ok in a Batman hoodie, but it did not show off her assets.
The day ended with Whitney hypnotizing Rachels cheer friend so that they would like her and think that Rachel was a weird nerd (also got one of the cheer friends to come over in the morning and give her fashion advice, while the other would help her get ready for cheerleading. She also hypnotized chase so that she (Whitney) could give him the best sex ever.
In the morning Whitney hypnotized her mom and dad and convinced them that she was the star of the family.
Then her cheer friend came in and she redid her hair and chose an outfit for her. She actually looked really good. And she was ready to live her sisters life.
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