The idea of May having complete control over Max is one nearly everyone with an annoying younger sibling has wished for at some point. All the petty fights and meaningless disagreements the two had would be no more- May could finally get Max to see things her way. Being, however, a young girl dealing with a younger brother, her intentions were not sexual- for now, at least. May was, shall we say, a bit more small-minded. Sensing an opportunity to "get back" at Max, along with an easy way to shirk responsibility, May, with a tone of playful superiority in her voice, uttered,
"I don't want to do my own chores any more. From now on, Max, you'll be my maid!"
An innocent request, seemingly enough. However, as May and Max would both soon learn, Ecchiluv and his powers had a perverse talent for twisting things to become more sexual. Eyes glowing white, pupils staring ahead blankly, Max responded with a monotone, "Yes, Mistress May." Suddenly, what looked to be a ray of sapphire-blue electricity bolted out from the stone and into Max's body, cocooning his entire being in a gleam of the same shade. May gasped, hoping sincerely she didn't hurt Max. Then, taking a moment to look at Max, desperately asking if he was alright without response, May mumbled to herself,
"Hmm... It looks like a Pokemon's evolution! But... bluer."
Evolution was indeed an accurate comparison for what was happening to Max, for he was changing into a newer, more mature form. As Max was naked, May could see all of the changes that were about to ripple through his body. The first, and perhaps most obvious, change in Max was that he grew older. Childhood passed into adolescence and then puberty as Max grew into a teenage body, matching and eventually exceeding May in height. Curiously, rather than growing as a boy would, he seemed to be developing into a young woman. His arms grew dainty, hands became delicate with long, green-painted nails, legs lengthened and shaped up, waist slimmed, hips pushed outwards, and his greenish-black hair grew down to his bottom. His boyish genitals were sucked into his groin, reshaping into a girlish cunt. His butt expanded furiously into a shapely, womanly ass, far bigger than his sister's. Up on his chest, two bountiful breasts, each easily larger than his own head, burst out, putting May's modest boobs to shame. Last of all, his face changed to be distinctly more feminine, leaving him, or rather, her, with smooth skin, delicate features, and soft, plump lips. Her eyes glowed with a deep blue radiance, showing the necklace's control over her.
After Max's body changed, her discarded clothing began to transform as well. Her shirt and pants melded together and reshaped to become a short black dress with a white apron. Her sneakers transformed into black high-heeled shoes, and a lacy white hat materialized from nowhere. Then, all the clothing floated up into the air and flung itself towards Max, forcing her into itself. This was all quite a shock to May. Now Max not only looked the part of a maid for May, but dressed the part, too. May had not expected her words to be taken so literally, or so sexually. Deciding to test if her original intent had even made its way through the perversions, May instructed Max to clean up their campsite. With an almost robotic response of, "Yes, Mistress May," in a somewhat deep but still womanly voice, Max bent over and began picking small bits of litter off the ground. This action gave May a close view of Max's plump, barely-covered ass. She eyed it, feeling envious and kind of turned on.
"Is it right for me to be feeling aroused by the sight of Max," May asked herself. "Isn't that incest?"
A voice came into her thoughts again, the same one she had heard earlier. "No. He's been transformed so much, he's no longer really your brother."
May thought to herself, "thanks, voice in my head! Although, as I look at how sexy Max has gotten, I'm starting to feel a bit inadequate about my own figure. Any suggestions?"
"Well, that necklace allows you to command Max to do anything, even things that should be impossible. If you really wanted, you could tell him to transform you into something else."
With that, the voice stopped, for now at least. May looked over to her former-brother-turned-servant-girl, then at her sapphire necklace. The possibilities were almost endless! Now, the only question was what to do next.
Does May make Max do something different, or does she enact some roundabout transformations on her own body? Or does she continue questioning this mysterious voice?
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