This choice: A pony walks in on you two! • Go Back...Chapter #6Enter, Applejack by: Unknown “Pinkie Pie? Is that you in there? The doc said ah’m fine, so let’s go!”
Just when you thought that this couldn’t get any more humiliating, you hear a mare’s voice calling out from behind the door. Thanks to the rowdy pink pony behind you, you’re filled with panic as you realise the gravity of the situation- if this pony comes into the room, you can kiss goodbye to your reputation and dignity!
As Pinkie forces out the last of her load into the massively overpacked diaper, you frantically search the room for a place to hide. But what would be the point? Even if you were to find a good enough hiding spot, surely the chatter from your ‘back seat occupant’ and the stench from the slop that swims around your flank would be enough to give you away.
“Applejaaaack! We’re in heeeeereeeee!” Pinkie yells at the top of her lungs, causing you to cringe. You quickly try to turn around and force a hoof into her mouth, but the restrictive nature of your diaper combined with the volume of its contents makes this all but impossible. In the end, all you can do is watch in horror as the door opens to reveal an orange mare in a cowboy hat.
“Pinkie, ah hope yer’ not botherin’ the patients in-”
Immediately, she’s hit by the overwhelming force of the diaper’s smell which hits her hard on the nose like a sledgehammer. You struggle to watch as she suffers under the cloud of stink that you and Pinkie have created together, forcing her to cover her muzzle with her hat. As she manages to regain her bearings, your cheeks explode into a fiery flush as the room falls into silence. After a few tense seconds, a loud *frrrp* escapes Pinkie’s backside as she finishes pooping, the sound of which echoes around the walls of the room. It also causes the manure in your diaper to bubble again like a filthy hot-tub.
“Oh, I... erm... ah’m sorry ma’am,” Applejack says, her voice muffled by her makeshift gas mask,”ah never realised you were doin’ yer’ business! Pinkie, what the hay are you doin’?”
“Hey Applejack!” Pinkie yells, forcing you downwards so she can get a better look at your surprise ‘guest’. As she does this, the contents of the diaper begin to seep out of the sides and onto your legs. Applejack widens her eyes at the sight of this, and quickly looks back and forth between the diaper and Pinkie. “ This is Orange Cream! Or was it Creamy Orange? Or maybe... What is your name by the way?” she asks you.
“P-P-Pinkie?! Are you... Are you inside that with her?!” Applejack asks her, her hat falling away from her face. As you’d expect, her face is aghast.
Pinkie giggles, probably unaware of the unbelievably awkward situation she’s created for both you and Applejack. “You should try it, AJ!” she says. “Trust me, it’s super duper pooper fun!”
Sweet Celestia, did she honestly just say that? You have no idea what Applejack is thinking right now, but you can sure as hell guess...  indicates the next chapter needs to be written. |
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