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What's it like as predator, instead of prey?
This choice: Continue with the flash back to the point where you devour Susan.  •  Go Back...
Chapter #5

Screw societies view of pretty!

    by: manubestofplus Author IconMail Icon
*an addition by: ChrisisX*

releasing another loud belch again, She looks down at the pieces of the broken bed and says in an embarrassed way "I guess I put on a little weight huh sis?"

Some things in life truly are amazing, in the back of your mind you remember thinking (I should do something to help mike and his girlfriend and find out what's going on). But all you do is say "yeah Susan I'm glad they stuffed you nicely. The fat looks good on you." It could be the alchohol, but even in your tipsy state you still feel there is something wrong with saying that.

Susan asks "sis can I get some help up I'm having some trouble." In your influenced state you listen to what she says and walk over to her. She gets a wide evil grin on her face. You realize the stupidity of your action as she opens her mouth wide, wider then she even did when gulping down Mikes girl friend. You close your eyes expecting certain doom, but all that Susan does is Belch very loudly in your face, The hot gasses from her gut smell absolutely repulsive as they wash over your face and rattle the windows (You can't say your breath is much better it seems to run in the family, Mom, Susan, You, the only one lucky enough to not be afflicted is mike. At least it was mike.) She giggles and says "scared ya did'nt I sis?"

You laugh in relief even though your eyes are still watering from the smell. She giggles again and barely manages to heft herself up. looking in mikes mirror, and saying in a completely serious voice, "man, I'm sexy." You get taken a bit aback by that, you are acustomed to the common view as the less weight you have the better, but when you think about it your sister does look sexy, good, maybe even good enough to eat.

Your sister catches the attracted look in your eye and in mock innocence asks "want a kiss?" You immediatly form a plan and say in the lustiest voice you can manage "I would find that absolutely divine." She kisses you square on the lips as you had planned, again you realize how awful her breath is. You prevent this from distracting you though you slowly open your mouth wider and your lips slide over her head. She does'nt immediately realize what is going on so you use that opporotunity to bend her elbows and stick them aginto your mouth. You violently suck down her arms and neck as she starts to flail, twisting herself around. You waste no time and greedily indulge yourself on her ample bust, your mouth stretching to accomodate you large meal. At this point her head, arms and shoulders enter your throat causing your own bust to expand greatly ripping your clothing and bra. Susan is struggling very hard, You don't remember her being anywhere near this strong! Luckily for you she lacks anything that resembles technique, and in her flailing knocks you up against the opposite wall and knocking herself into a verticle position facing down into your open mouth. You are in a bit of pain as she is forced by gravity and her own movements all the way into your waiting stomach.

Your gut forces you into a sitting position as it expands to it's new four foot diameter.You release a titanic belch as the rest of your clothing is ripped to shreds.A much louder belch emanates from...

You have the following choices:

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1. Darlene or your mother.

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2. Susan inside your huge gut.

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