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Rated: 18+ · Interactive · Action/Adventure · #1838159
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Chapter #6

Get Edward to notice him!

    by: Quagmire69 Author IconMail Icon
“If you can’t hear me…then maybe you’ll feel me!” Upon saying this, the teenage alchemist commenced an attack on his towering brother’s foot. He punched and kicked the hot flesh with everything he had, but the huger blond failed to take notice to any of the feeble blows. Without warning, Edward pivoted his foot and removed it from his pint-sized brother’s vision just as the latter threw a punch at empty air. His golden orbs drifted upward and he observed Ed placing his elephantine toes overhead before bringing them down upon his diminutive self. In that brief second, Alphonse’s mouth hung open in disbelief and he felt the hairs on the back of his neck stand up straight. “NO! Broth—!”

*THUMP*

The long-haired colossus was totally oblivious as he turned around and smashed his little brother under his heavy power…partially because he had not. Tiny, helpless Alphonse had been tucked into the crevice between two of his bulbous toes. There, stuck between his beloved brother’s meaty hallux and neighboring digit, Al could merely squirm and attempt to yell over the earthshattering kabooms generated by the titan’s strides. Ed eventually returned to his seat at the kitchen table, but this didn’t do much to change Al’s dilemma. He remained trapped between Edward’s toes; writhing in the stifling heat and rancid scent of the man’s right foot.

“E-Ed…h-help…! Get me…get me out of here…!” the centimeter-sized male pleaded, but his soft voice couldn’t reach Ed’s ears as the larger boy continued to read. In the several minutes that passed, the sweaty giant occasionally clenched his five toes. What was an absentminded action on his part was torture for Alphonse as the smaller of the two Elrics got his whole body quashed between the mammoth-sized, sweat-soaked digits of a superior male. The young, cute face of the miniaturized prodigy was squeezed into the moist, fleshy wall of Edward’s big toe and Al’s dizzy eyes rolled into the back of his skull with disgust. Just when the former, bodiless boy thought his torment would go on forever, Edward leaned his weight back until he was balancing the chair he sat on upon its two back legs. At the same time, he lifted both feet off the floor and propped them up onto the tabletop...

You have the following choices:

1. Dislodging the little Elric boy!

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2. With Al still trapped!

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