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Rated: 13+ · Interactive · Action/Adventure · #1885147

An amusement park that you never leave the same way you came

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Chapter #5

the gray tunnel

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Once you pass thru the tunnel you begin to race up the tall ramp up to the top of the coaster. But unknown to you, as you are moving up the track, you are beginning to turn older. First you start to feel wind rushing against your head you then rub your hands thru your head and a whole clump of hair is on your hand. Then, as you begin to descend down the coaster your hair all falls out leaving you with a bald head. Then as your going down, grey hairs begin to push out of your scalp giving you a thick head of grey hair. Then you suddenly lurch to the left and right several times. But unknown to you, each time you swerve left and right, you lose your muscle definition, slowly becoming a layer of fat. By the time you are done with the swerves, you now weight 150 pounds more at 275 than your normal weight of 125. After that, you begin to corkscrew around, and as you are doing so, you are getting wrinkles appearing on your face. Then, you begin to slow down as you creep to the terminal. Soon you realize what had happened to you. You begin to freak out at the new, older, fat you that has just been created. But as you pass a large LED screen, it says AGED TO 52..... BEGINNING MIND ALTERATION... and then your mind begins to become hazy as new memories and experiences are implanted into your old brain. Once you reach the exit terminal and exit the coaster, you feel as if you had always been this age. "Man, I'm hungry" you say, as you begin to leave for the

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