This choice: Jack answers another person's prayer • Go Back...Chapter #3Jack answers another person's prayer by: DragoTime   "Uh..*pant*Uh God *pant*" Ben groaned as his orgasm slowly came to an end. He laid down on his stomach on the floor. "God..*pant*..that was..*pant*..incredible..."
"Did you like that?" asked Jack, looking up from the comic. Ben simply gave him a "Duh" look. Jack waved his hand, and Ben floated up onto the bed, the duvet magically covering him.
"God I'm exhausted," said Ben.
"Well you just rest there, while I decide who's getting my help next!" commanded Jack. Jack reached out with his mind, and scanned all outstanding prayers in the world. However, he then sensed that a new prayer was incoming from a girl who only lived a few miles away. He stared at Tyler's TV, and willed it to turn on to an image of the girl.
The girl in question was Fiona, a 15-year-old girl who was currently stood staring at her nude body in her bedroom mirror.
"I'll never be beautiful," she sighed. Fiona wasn't exactly a beauty queen, was she wasn't ugly either. She had A-cup boobs with an ass to match, as well as a bit of extra fat on her, and a few spots here and there, but she wasn't hideous. For the two boys that, unbeknownst to her, were watching from miles away, she was certainly attractive enough to encourage a rush of blood towards their groins.
"God she's gorgeous," said Tyler.
"Isn't she? Let's hear what she wants her God to do for her," replied Jack. Fiona kneeled down by her bed, and prayed.
"Dear God, please make me more beautiful. Amen," she said.
"Well you heard the girl," said Jack. "I'm gonna go give the girl what she wants!"
"Wait!" shouted Ben.
"What is it?" asked Jack.
"What about me? I want to get some action too!"
Jack thought for a moment, and then snapped his fingers. Suddenly a naked girl appeared in the middle of Ben's bedroom.
"What the hell?" she asked. "How did I get here?" She desperately tried to cover herself.
"Amanda?" asked Ben. Amanda was the hot girl in Ben's class that he'd had a huge crush on, so Jack had brought her here for him.
"Ben? Jack? How the fuck did I get here!?" asked Amanda.
"That's not important," commanded Jack. "What's important is that Ben is now your boyfriend. You love him with all your heart and soul, and want him to be happy. You will never cheat on him, but you don't mind if he cheats on you, because you want him to be happy. From now on, whenever Ben says "Obey", you must obey every single command he gives you without question, until he says "Free Will", at which point you no longer have to obey him, but you will still love him absolutely, and want to be with him. You will never get pregnant unless Ben commands you to, and when you give birth, instead of pain, you will feel pure sexual pleasure. The two of you are immune to STDs, and have unlimited stamina and sexual fluids. Simply thinking about Ben makes you horny, and your absolute favourite hobby is having sex with him." Once Jack had given these commands, Amanda ran across the room and jumped on top of Ben, ravaging him with kisses.
"I'll leave you lovebirds alone," smirked Jack, teleporting away.
Fiona finished her prayer, and got up off her knees, moving towards her drawers to get dressed for the day.
"Hello Fiona," said Jack.
"Ah!" Fiona shrieked as she turned around, trying to cover her nudity. "Who the fuck are you!?"
"The Alpha and Omega. The one to whom you spoke. Fiona, I'm God," replied the omnipotent teen, mentally commanding her to believe him.
"God?..Wow.." replied Fiona. "But uh..would you mind closing your eyes while I get dressed?"
"Fiona, I'm God, you don't need to worry about dressing yourself in front of me," replied Jack. "But if it makes you feel better, I'll take my clothes off too!" In an instant Jack was nude, stood showing himself off to Fiona, who moved her hands away from her private parts as she stared in awe of both her first display of divine power and the naked boy in front of her.
Fiona snapped back into reality when she suddenly got a worrying thought.
"What's wrong Fiona?" asked Jack.
"I thought you knew everything?" she asked in response.
"I have the ability to know everything," explained Jack. "Think of it like having Google inside my head, if Google knew every piece of information in existance. I can know everything, but I'd much rather you tell me."
"Well.." began Fiona. "I was just a bit worried that you were here to send me to hell.."
"What? Why would I do that?"
"Because of that selfish prayer I just said!" Jack walked up to Fiona, and pulled her into a cuddle.
"Fiona, there was nothing wrong with that prayer," he said, having to will his cock to stay soft, due to the stimulation he was getting from the feeling of this naked girl against him. "In fact, I'm going to give you what you want."
"You mean...?"
"Yep! I'm gonna make you beautiful!"
"Really? Oh thank you God, thank you!"
Still cuddling her closely, Jack picked Fiona up, and carried her to her bed, sitting her down on it gently. Jack sat next to her, and laid his hands on her belly, causing her to shudder under his heavenly touch. Jack pushed in gently, causing Fiona's belly to shrink, until there was no excess fat on her at all.
"Wow, that was cool," she said.
"And I'm just getting started," smiled Jack. Slowly, he ran his hands across Fiona's body causing her to shudder with delight. As he did, every hair (Other than on her head), spot and any other blemish vanished, leaving her with completely perfect skin. Next, Jack rolled Fiona onto her belly, and grabbed her ass. As he did, it grew in his hands, until it was a nice size. He laid his hands on her back and massaged her sensually, strengthening her back muscles as he did, since she'd be needing them soon enough. While he was changing her, Jack had been slowly using his powers to make her increasingly horny, meaning her pussy was getting wetter as he stroked her back. Eventually Jack rolled Fiona onto her back, and moved his head down to her breasts, taking her left nipple in her mouth. Fiona let out a gasp as he did so, anticipating some sucking from the teenage God. Jack howeverl started blowing! As he did, Fiona's boob began to grow, as if being inflated by Jack's mouth. Finally, when the boob was a full E-cup, Jack moved away, admiring the girl that had one huge boob and one tiny one. Mercifully, Jack moved down and gave the same treatment to the other boob, causing it to grow to match its sister.
"Done," said Jack. Fiona got out of bed and admired herself in the mirror.
"Wow, I look gorgeous!" exclaimed Fiona. "Thank you God!"
"You're welcome," replied Jack, wrapping his arms around her from behind, his now hard dick rubbing against her ass.   indicates the next chapter needs to be written. |
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