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Rated: 18+ · Interactive · Ghost · #1895450

You are a teenager and looked forward to life when you are killed. What's a spirit to do?

This choice: run away  •  Go Back...
Chapter #4

run away

    by: NVR Author IconMail Icon
"I..I" you wanted to say you were ok and run away from there, but the alien sound of the redhead's voice took you by surprise and made you stop in your tracks. You looked at the worried brunette, then at the blonde trying to reanimate somebody on the floor.. yourself. You felt yourself getting dizzy. Where was the redhead if you were possessing her body? Were you beyond salvation? The experience was too eerie to describe, watching your mangled unresponsive body right in front of you.

"Taylor? you look so pale... I know it's not a pretty scene but you look like you saw a ghost or something" The brunette, apparently your friend, gave you a scarily accurate description of your situation

"Hey, please help me he's not reacting" the blonde shouted with desperation, not knowing what else to do with your empty body

"Don't worry Tay, just stay there and I'll help" the brunette told you and walked over to your body.

Alone with your thoughts, you could finally recover and adapt to this new reality, where you were occupying the body of this attractive redhead. Not knowing what else to do you noticed how another man arrived to help and try to reanimate your corpse without success. The three people were too focused to look at you, probably because the brunette girl told them you were in shock or something.

A part of you wanted to go and tell them your ghost took over this body, but you noticed you would probably just scare them and you wouldn't be able to explain how or even why you did it. You decided the best thing would be to walk away from there, saying farewell to your former corporeal host, and try to make sense of everything. You walked in whatever direction, noticing how the casual clothing of the redhead meant you were receiving unfamiliar but welcome gusts of wind on your dainty arms, legs and feet, and also how you felt you were walking in a funny way that just felt right, swinging your arms and moving your hips in a way you didn't use to in your time as a man, but also knowing intuitively this was an effective and graceful way to move your new lithe body, it just added to the list of weird things you keep noticing since possessing this body

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