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Chapter #5
Meeting the Insane Oni
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In front of Stephen and Laura was one of the biggest submarines they had ever seen. It could easily fit a monster around 800 feet. It had a simple, old-time design, but it looked like it had been repaired several times.
Stephen was amazed. He had never seen a submarine in real life before. He couldn't tell if it was abandoned or not. Laura pulled him from his train of thought.
"There an open hatch-"
"On the submarines-"
"Top. Let's go in-"
"And check it out."
Before Stephen could answer, Laura was already on her way to the sub. They reached the open hatch and climbed in. Closing the hatch above them, the water suddenly drained. Laura took Stephen out of her mask and put her on her shoulder, then entered the sub proper.
The inside was nothing like the out. The hall they were in was narrow, but it was furnished like the inside of a home, with desks nailed to the floor and pictures on the hull.
"You think someone lives here?" You ask Laura, confused. Before she could answer, you heard a voice.
"WHO THE F**K ARE YOU?!"
Turning around, both you and Laura faced a woman with a harpoon gun pointed at you. The woman was a Oni, around 725 feet with orange skin, red eyes, and short black hair. She had a set of small horns on top of her head. This woman was incedibly fat, to the point of almost bursting out of her black, one-piece bikini. She did not look happy at your intrusion.
"I SAID WHO ARE YOU AND WHY ARE YOU IN KAREN?!"
Karen must have been the name of the sub. You decided to answer.
"My name is Stephen and this is Laura. We saw you subma- I mean Karen near the reef. The hatch on top was open. We thought Karen was abandoned, so we came in."
While she still looked mad, she at least lowered her harpoon gun. The hull of the submarine started creaking. Suddenly, the woman started touching the wall.
"Shh, don't worry Karen. I'm dealing with these two. I'm sure they'll leave soon enough." She said while stroking the wall.
This woman was cleary crazy. You cleared your throat.
"Um, do you mind introducing yourself?" You ask.
"My name is Aquell." The oni replied, still stroking the wall.
You didn't want Aquell to point her harpoon gun at you again, so you asked a simple question.
"Do you mind showing us around Karen?"
Aquell stopped stroking the wall and looked at you. How did she react to your question?
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